Monthly Archives: November 2012

100 word challenge – Stories from other cultures

You have 100 words to write a paragraph, maybe an opening paragraph or two based on this picture.

Think about where the story is set.

What is happening?

Who are the main characters?

What problem do they have?

Remember to write in full sentences with capital letters and full stops. Also remember to use connectives like we have done this week. Can you use interesting adjectives and adverbs?

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4H connectives sentences based on The Crab Man

Year 4 have been busy working on connectives to join two sentences and to make their writing more interesting. Have a listen to these children reading their best sentences out and please leave a comment on their work!